Interesting(award winning)poem---Second Mouth by korean american franny choi
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Mao Clone

09/19/2015, 07:57:22




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Second Mouth

By Franny Choi

 

Other-lips     whispering     between my legs.

What they called black hole     not-thing

is really packed full of secrets.     A rebel mouth

testifying from the underside.     Careful

not to let it     speak too loudly.     Only hum

demure     in polite company — never laugh

or spit on the sidewalk     or complain

lest we both be dragged     under the wheels of

one of those.     Or worse     coddled

smiled at     as at a lapdog acting wolf.

Or worse     called ugly     a cruel joke. Or — 

there are always     worse things.

Too many messengers     shot.     But then

who wouldn’t fear     an eyeless face

whose ghost stories     always     come true?

 http://poetryisjustawesome.com/2014/09/17/franny-choi-speaking-about-vaginas-rebel-mouth/






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That's what happens when an Asian-American tries to write poetry
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09/19/2015, 23:47:35




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Khan

09/21/2015, 20:56:06




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Impromptu 1 Liner:"Retract ur slimy tongue.My2nd mouth is no portal to paradise"
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Mao Clone

09/20/2015, 02:07:32




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Inspired by heavy metal mag:

The Queen bent over and asked Dan to gaze into his holy portal. Dan promptly gave him a good kick






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Classic example of why I consider lots of poetry unadulterated bullcrap.
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09/19/2015, 14:05:09




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did you ever see that Jim Carey movie: Ace Ventura Pet Detective?
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cyber horse

09/21/2015, 04:46:45




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That movie was not for adults, basically for the teenage boys, lots of jokes about genitals and bathroom jokes. Lots of farting.

Saw maybe 20 minutes of it. That was good enough!

That poem seems to be straight out of the movie Ace Ventura Pet Detective.






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My Prince by Nathalia Bernstein (Age 9)
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Mao Clone

09/19/2015, 08:09:49




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Nathalia Bernstein (Age 9)

MY PRINCE

My prince is not coming on a white horse
but on a turtle.
That is why it will take so long
before we are together.

from 2015 Rattle Young Poets Anthology

http://poetryisjustawesome.com/2015/03/30/my-prince-by-nathalia-bernstein-hat-tip-rattle-com/






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